Sometimes it can be difficult to begin dissecting a paper. Problems tend to be more organic than self-contained. An issue of grammar tends to flow into an issue of structure, and separating the two isn’t as simple as telling individual approaches to each. Think of it more as a series of surgical strikes.
Yes, English is far more violent than you might have realized.
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RICK: Professor, I asked what's wrong with my paper?
HOBO: I heard you. I'm just figuring out where to begin.
HOBO: I heard you. I'm just figuring out where to begin.
